[Grammar] is this sentence correct?

[Zoe2008]

Will you combine two models / goods at the same location for inspection to minimize the reinspection fee?

 

[Uncle M]

I would say:

Would you minimise the re-inspection fee by examining two models at the same time and location?

Note that I have hyphenated re-inspection and used the UK English spelling of minimise. Minimise may not be the best word to use, however. Why not say reduce or offer a discount on...

Uncle M (not a teacher)

 

[Kotfor]

What I am not sure about is "two goods". Is it ok to say that? I doubt.

 

[Uncle M]

No, you would say two items of goods. But if it's a car, for example, you would be specific and say car (in other words, describe the goods).

Uncle M