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    #1

    grammar checking

    Dear teacher,


    Would you please help me check these sentences below?

    " Thanks for your letter and shop drawing enclose that we have just received this morning. After we refer the letter, we would like to confirm with you 3 issues for decision as:

    1. Would you please inform us before you intall electric system 2 days?
    2. Will you choose supcontractor for intalling this system?
    3. When can we turn on power after we finish intall this system?

    Beside, we hope that you allow us to send a person for supervisor while you intall this system.

    We are looking to hearing form you soon.

    Best regards,"

    Thanks so much for your help teacher.

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    #2

    Re: grammar checking

    Quote Originally Posted by ngocha View Post
    We are looking to hearing form you soon.
    (We are looking) / We look forward to hearing from you soon.

    I prefer the version I have underlined.

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    Re: grammar checking

    2. Will you choose subcontractor for installing this system?
    Will you be using a subcontractor to install this system?

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