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    #1

    proofread please

    "The richest man in the village said (that) he was not happy because he didn't know if the sheep were going to be lost the next day and thieves were always trying to break into his house."

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    Re: proofread please

    Quote Originally Posted by ostap77 View Post
    "The richest man in the village said (that) he was not happy because he didn't know if the sheep were going to be lost the next day and (that) thieves were always trying to break into his house."
    It's grammatically correct, but it's a weird combination of ideas. Use either two thats or none.

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