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    Dear Teacher,
    many thanks for the last reply, I'm sorry for numbering is not correct that make you have difficulty in revising, I'll pay attention next time.
    best regard,
    Ms. thachha

    hereby the new one, please revise them.

    1. On July 14,2005, at Ministry of Planning and Investment, there was a conference led by Deputy Minister Nguyen Duc Hoa to discuss with the PPC Leaders of Quang Binh, Quang Tri, Thua Thien Hue and KonTum about solutions to speed up the implementation of Central region Livelihood Improvement Project (CRLIP).
    2. After hearing from Manager of CPO reported the implementation process of the project during the last time and proposed some initiatives to accelerate implementation speed during the forthcoming; and hearing issues from Leaders of the provinces, the donors, the relevant partners, Deputy Minister Nguyen Duc Hoa provided some conclusions below:(....)

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    Re: Is it OK?

    1. On July 14,2005, at the Ministry of Planning and Investment, there was a conference led by Deputy Minister Nguyen Duc Hoa to discuss with the PPC Leaders of Quang Binh, Quang Tri, Thua Thien Hue and KonTum about solutions to speed up the implementation of Central region Livelihood Improvement Project (CRLIP).

    2. After hearing from the Manager of CPO who reported the implementation process of the project during the last time, and proposed some initiatives to accelerate implementation speed during the forthcoming; and hearing issues from Leaders of the provinces, the donors, the relevant partners, Deputy Minister Nguyen Duc Hoa provided some conclusions below:(....)

    Correct, but the sentence is too long. I suggest:

    2. The Manager of CPO reported on the implementation process of the project during the last time, and proposed some initiatives to accelerate implementation speed during the forthcoming project.

    After hearing issues from Leaders of the provinces, the donors, and the relevant partners, Deputy Minister Nguyen Duc Hoa provided some conclusions below:(....)

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