Help on dialogs

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ediblegrammar

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Hi,

AB : What are you doing, Wayne?

WAYNE : I’m eating.

AB : You are still eating? We’re already late!

WAYNE : Are you sure?

AB : Yes! I already told you, right?

WAYNE : You did? But nevermind! I’m sure they’ll wait for us. Have you eaten?

AB : Yes, I have. Could you eat faster?

WAYNE : Sure!

Anything wrong with the dialog? Maybe on grammar or sentence structure?

Thank you.
 

Raymott

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Hi,

AB : What are you doing, Wayne?

WAYNE : I’m eating.

AB : You are still eating? We’re already late!

WAYNE : Are you sure?

AB : Yes! I already told you, right?

WAYNE : You did? But nevermind! I’m sure they’ll wait for us. Have you eaten?

AB : Yes, I have. Could you eat faster?

WAYNE : Sure!

Anything wrong with the dialog? Maybe on grammar or sentence structure?

Thank you.
The grammar and sentence structure are good. Whether that makes it a good dialogue is another point.
 

ediblegrammar

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Thank you! Phew.
 

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Never mind. Two words.
 
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