This was the only thing which held you my respect.

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rohanvora

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plz tell me whether the following sentence is grammatically correct or not.

"This was the only thing which held you my respect."
 

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Maybe:

I held respect for you only because of this.
due to this I held respect for you.
The only reason I held respect for you was this.
 

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plz tell me whether the following sentence is grammatically correct or not.

"This was the only thing which held you my respect."


*just an assistant ESL teacher.

I would say no, but maybe in some dialect. You probably want to say something like, "That was the only thing that I respected about you."

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*just an assistant ESL teacher.

I would say no, but maybe in some dialect. You probably want to say something like, "That was the only thing that I respected about you."

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That's much better! "hold" doesn't sound necessary here. We should first know what rohanvora really wants to say.
 

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Exactly how Marmoset interpreted. Then it is right I suppose?
 

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Exactly how Marmoset interpreted. Then it is right I suppose?
I am not a teacher.

No. "Hold" is unidiomatic there. We hold people in "high esteem" or "contempt"---we can't hold them in respect, and we certainly can't hold them our respect. I suspect you were going for, "This was the only thing that won you my respect."
 

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hmm okay thank you all :)
 
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