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    Home is nowhere but in this Universe

    Hi,

    again, I want to make this something sounds poetic and philosophical - which one is my correct English?

    1.
    Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, this is home.

    2.
    Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, is home.

    3.
    Home is nowhere but at this point in this Universe, it is home.

    Which one makes sense and sounds better to you more?

    Thanks.

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    Re: Home is nowhere but in this Universe

    Quote Originally Posted by iamtime View Post
    1. Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, this is home. Fine

    2. Home is nowhere but in this Universe; it is here, at this point, is home.

    3. Home is nowhere but at this point in this Universe; itthis is home.
    That's what I think, but I'm not very poetic.

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    Re: Home is nowhere but in this Universe

    I like the first one.

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    #4

    Re: Home is nowhere but in this Universe

    You don't need to capitalise universe.

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    Re: Home is nowhere but in this Universe

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    You don't need to capitalise universe.
    Got it. Thanks you, Rover

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