iamtime
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- Jan 15, 2011
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- Student or Learner
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- Chinese
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- Malaysia
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- UK
Hi,
again, I want to make this something sounds poetic and philosophical - which one is my correct English?
1.
Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, this is home.
2.
Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, is home.
3.
Home is nowhere but at this point in this Universe, it is home.
Which one makes sense and sounds better to you more?
Thanks.
again, I want to make this something sounds poetic and philosophical - which one is my correct English?
1.
Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, this is home.
2.
Home is nowhere but in this Universe, it is here at this point, is home.
3.
Home is nowhere but at this point in this Universe, it is home.
Which one makes sense and sounds better to you more?
Thanks.