Ever Student
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- Joined
- Aug 22, 2008
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
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- Iran
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- Iran
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Positive Thinking
Positive thinking contains a huge number of letters are continuously posted by one to a mailbox from which a postman takes finally those letters and delivers his addresses.
Positive thinking is open to the bright ways that each way is also open to each door at which one is knocking.
A hardworking one with positive thinking tries not enter a frustrating idea inside that stops him achieving to his goal. It really works out and without doubt having got a trivial positive thinking does show its effect. Try it out!
Positive Thinking
Positive thinking contains a huge number of letters are continuously posted by one to a mailbox from which a postman takes finally those letters and delivers his addresses.
Positive thinking is open to the bright ways that each way is also open to each door at which one is knocking.
A hardworking one with positive thinking tries not enter a frustrating idea inside that stops him achieving to his goal. It really works out and without doubt having got a trivial positive thinking does show its effect. Try it out!