Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Please, would you proofread my poem "A GLANCE".
A GLANCE
You glanced at me and your blue eyes sparkled,
Giving me a glimmer of hope,
Which turned into a torrent of tears.
Later, I saw a picture of you in the paper,
You have left this world,
Your glance inside me illuminating my heavy footfalls.
A GLANCE
You glanced at me and your blue eyes sparkled,
Giving me a glimmer of hope,
Which turned into a torrent of tears.
Later, I saw a picture of you in the paper,
You have left this world,
Your glance inside me illuminating my heavy footfalls.