ostap77
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"Chernobyl was a disester no one up top wanted to admit, and to be honest, have done little to rectify. As bad as any situation moght be,however, there is the hope that there is always a silver lining beneath it."
1)I would have written it in a slightly different way. First, I would change "there is the hope that" to "There is a hope that..." or "There is hope that"?
2)Second, since hope can refer not only to the present but things in the future I would use the future simple instead of the present simple "there is a hope that there will always be...".
3)Frankly I doubt "no one up top" being correct. How about "atop" or "on top"?
1)I would have written it in a slightly different way. First, I would change "there is the hope that" to "There is a hope that..." or "There is hope that"?
2)Second, since hope can refer not only to the present but things in the future I would use the future simple instead of the present simple "there is a hope that there will always be...".
3)Frankly I doubt "no one up top" being correct. How about "atop" or "on top"?
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