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    #1

    loan

    Please correct where do you think correction is necessary.

    Yesterday I received a phone from Nja .He informed that he has bought a new apartment in KBB society. His inherited house has been sold out and he took his portion/share of money from his sibling. The amount he had taken from his sibling was not enough to buy a new apartment in any locality so he borrowed a reasonable amount from his friend and office colleague.

    He is in financial stretch and unable to lend you anything. So please donít demand him he is not in a position to entertain you. He also informed that his elder brother who claimed that he has a big supporter of Nja was back out when he needed his help.

    The finally he realize that money is the sixth sense to allow you to enjoy the other five.

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    #2

    Re: loan

    Way too much detail.


    Nja has made it clear that his current financial situation will not allow him to assist you.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    #3

    Re: loan

    thanks

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    #4

    Re: loan

    thanks for your assistance.Please tell me the whole paragraph is shown any sense please help me.

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