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    Are these sentences correct? Please help

    1) The display and decoration in the supermarket during sales season arouses/stimulate the feeling of good deal, cheapness and affordability.

    2) The decoration will create a sense of festivity.

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    Re: Are these sentences correct? Please help

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) The display and decoration in the supermarket during sales season arouses/stimulate the feeling of good deal, cheapness and affordability.

    2) The decoration will create a sense of festivity.
    The displays and decorations in the supermarket during the sales season arouses/stimulate (will?) create the feeling of good deal, cheapness and affordability.

    cheapness is not a good thing as it's associated with poor quality
    good deal is also not a good word choice

    The decorations will create a sense of festivity.

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