Dear teacher, please help to correct my English writing. Any error in there sentences

[austinle]

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[Soup]

Hello austinle,

My corrections are as follows:

Dear Kristina,

How are you doing [STRIKE]back[/STRIKE] over there? [STRIKE]All[/STRIKE]Are things going well for you? How's your job and your family?

Kristina, [STRIKE]all things coming[/STRIKE]everything is going very smoothly for me so far. I [STRIKE]just[/STRIKE] had a job interview[STRIKE]ed[/STRIKE] [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] last week and the manager who [STRIKE]was[/STRIKE] interviewed me [STRIKE]he[/STRIKE]was very interested in hiring me, especially because of my experience and [STRIKE]also my[/STRIKE] background.

I got hired [STRIKE]at[/STRIKE] the same day [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] I [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] interviewed. Most of the [STRIKE]management[/STRIKE]managers [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] at [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE]the company [STRIKE]they’re[/STRIKE]are very nice. I feel[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] that I’m a lucky one.

I just bought a car for [STRIKE]daily means of my[/STRIKE] work; [STRIKE]the color[/STRIKE]it isred and black. It cost me all of my [STRIKE]saving money[/STRIKE] savings. Now I [STRIKE]became a[/STRIKE]am poor [STRIKE]person[/STRIKE].

[STRIKE]Hey dear, a few words for you.[/STRIKE]Sorry this letter is so short.Hope[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE][STRIKE]will have[/STRIKE]to get a chance to meet up with you soon.

Best wishes,
T
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[austinle]

Thank you so much,
Austin.

 

[Soup]

Thank you so muck,
Austin.

Much?

You're welcome. :-D

 

[austinle]

hello

 

[austinle]

thanks

 

[austinle]

sorry. thanks

 

[austinle]

:lol:

 

[austinle]

:-D