Hi Teacher, please help me to correct my english writing gramma. Thank you

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The [STRIKE]most of the[/STRIKE] person that I like most [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] is my mother.
She is a good person. She always has concern[STRIKE]s [/STRIKE]for all things in my life.
She [STRIKE]does[/STRIKE] loves and cares for me [STRIKE]allot[/STRIKE] a lot. She usually cooks most [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] foods that I like[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE].
She is the person who [STRIKE]is [/STRIKE] works [STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] really hard,
and [STRIKE]sharing[/STRIKE]uses all [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] the money she [STRIKE]made[/STRIKE] makes for her family, and [STRIKE]be[/STRIKE] is able to save money for my education. She [STRIKE]was[/STRIKE] always [STRIKE]teaching[/STRIKE] taught me about things like how to be a good person,
My mother taught me how to live, and how to love everyone around me.
My mother is the best mother in the world.
Mom, [STRIKE]I'm loving [/STRIKE]I love you so much,
your lovely daughter,
T

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