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    #1

    correction

    I am going to present a course on errors in English language so I would like to introduce it as following , please correct my mistakes:


    This is a unique course in its presentation and the main reason is

    there are many mistakes have happened when we are talking they might have happened accidentally or we think that's the correct way. So I have focused on some of them so as to avoid fallen in them again and to be a good speaker.Not only that you might have encountered them in the exams,So keep on to have all benefit.

    I have written it again in another style.
    Last edited by diplomacy; 05-Apr-2011 at 18:21. Reason: to change

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    Re: correction

    Quote Originally Posted by diplomacy View Post
    I am going to present a course on errors in English language so I would like to introduce it as following , please correct my mistakes:


    This is a unique course,cares your daily dialogs whereas, while you are talking you are mistaken involuntary and you can't back down or you think that's the right way so,I have focused on the common ones so as to be a good speaker without hesitate or embarrassment.

    by the way, some of them have come in the exams so keep on to gain all benefit.
    This reads like automatic translation. I'm not completely clear on what half of it means.

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    #3

    Re: correction

    written in another style it would be better.

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    Re: correction

    Well, I will give it a try, but your original is so difficult to understand that my revision may not duplicate your original description.

    This unique course is designed to improve your communication skills. You may find when talking that you make mistakes or don't know how to say something in the correct way. This course will focus on common mistakes to help you speak without hesitation or embarrassment.

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