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    please help to correct

    Since this vessel will be delayed one day arrive to Japan. Please help keep closely follow up and release the goods to the consignee after clear / though customs. The consignee is urgently require the goods. Please advise if there is any problem need our assist.

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    Re: please help to correct

    Hi Zoe

    "The vessel's arrival in Japan will be delayed by one day. Could you please assist with close follow-up and release of the goods to the consignee after customs clearance.

    The consignee requires the goods urgently.

    Please advise if there is any problem that needs our assistance."

    Hope this helps and is not too late - only just spotted it over on the second webpage.


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