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    The members of the tribe

    Please, check if this sentence is grammatically correct. Thanks.

    In case the members of the tribe get into a quarrel and fight each other, the tribe loses its unity with each individual caring for his own interests to the point that the whole tribe is liable to collapse

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    Re: The members of the tribe

    How about should/if instead of in case?

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    Re: The members of the tribe

    Quote Originally Posted by Tdol View Post
    How about should/if instead of in case?
    An excellent suggestion! (Especially if it sounds better...) Thanks!

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