***** NOT A TEACHER *****
(1) Excellent as usual.
(2) May I simply note a few minor points that might distract some
(a) no comma after "dictator." That is definitely "wrong."
(b) No comma after "toppled" -- unless you want to stress it as an
(c) "they felt they must execute him" might be phrased as
"they felt they had to execute him."
(d) No comma after "power."
(e) "Mr. M's story" should be, I think, "Mr. M.'s story." I think that
you need a period after M, for it stands for his full last name.
(f) I think that many writing "experts" would suggest avoiding the use
of phrases such as "due to the fact." They say that it takes up a lot
of space. Be direct, they say. Rewrite it using "because."
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