[Grammar] How would you help your colleagues

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Ferdie11

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Hello,

Can help me check if there's grammar error in the sentences below.


Q. How would you help your colleagues?
A. I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example -- if I kept a positive attitude and stayed excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am they will have a tendency to become excited as well.


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Hello,

Can help me check if there's grammar error in the sentences below.


Q. How would you help your colleagues?
A. I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example. If I kept a positive attitude and stayed excited about my own job, they would see how enthusiastic I am and have a tendency to become excited as well.


Many thanks.
Bhai.
 

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Thanks so much, Bhai. What about this one?

I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example – I would keep a positive attitude and stay excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am they will have a tendency to become excited as well.
 

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Thanks so much, Bhai. What about this one?

I think I would help my colleagues by setting a good example – I would keep a positive attitude and stay excited about my own job. When they see how enthusiastic I am, they will have a tendency to become excited as well.

If the dependent clause comes before the main clause, it must be followed by a comma.
 
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