Roselin
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 20, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Hindi
- Home Country
- India
- Current Location
- India
At 4 p.m. my neighbour rang up and SAID,' Is Dheeraj there with you?' Dheeraj, her son SPENDS most of his time in my garden playing with my children, so whenever she IS not able to find him she RINGS me up to ask me where he IS.
' I am afraid, I HAVE not SEEN him today,' I SAID. 'But my children WENT to the beach this morning and HAVE not COME back yet. Perhaps he WENT with them.'
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At 4 p.m. my neighbour rang up and SAID,' Is Dheeraj there with you?' Dheeraj, her son SPENDS most of his time in my garden playing with my children, so whenever she WAS not able to find him she RANG me up to ask me where he WAS.
' I am afraid, I HAVE not SEEN him today,' I SAID. 'But my children WENT to the beach this morning and HAVE not COME back yet. Perhaps he WENT with them.'
***Now I want to know where is the mistake, if there is any then what is the reason behind it*****
' I am afraid, I HAVE not SEEN him today,' I SAID. 'But my children WENT to the beach this morning and HAVE not COME back yet. Perhaps he WENT with them.'
--------below is another attempt-----
At 4 p.m. my neighbour rang up and SAID,' Is Dheeraj there with you?' Dheeraj, her son SPENDS most of his time in my garden playing with my children, so whenever she WAS not able to find him she RANG me up to ask me where he WAS.
' I am afraid, I HAVE not SEEN him today,' I SAID. 'But my children WENT to the beach this morning and HAVE not COME back yet. Perhaps he WENT with them.'
***Now I want to know where is the mistake, if there is any then what is the reason behind it*****