The traffic light changes color too fast.

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scott833

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1)The traffic light changes colors too fast, we need to create a system to slow down the traffic light changing time.

2)The traffic light changes colors too fast, we need to create a system to slow down the traffic light from changing color too fast.
 

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Just say it changes, not that it changes color.
 

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1)The traffic light changes colors too fast, we need to create a system to slow down the traffic light changing time.

2)The traffic light changes colors too fast, we need to create a system to slow down the traffic light from changing color too fast.
Also, you can't join two sentences with a comma.
 

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Just say it changes, not that it changes color.

"The traffic light changes too fast, so we need to modify the system."
How does this sound, Barb_D and Raymott?
 

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