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    Help~Are these sentences grammatical & concise?

    Below are some sentences taken from one of my essays. Could you please tell me are they grammatical and native-like? The essay is talking about quality assurance of higher education. Thank you so much!!!
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    1. Quality assurance of higher education in Europe is currently being challenged in the following several aspects.

    ----Are "is being challenged" & "the following several aspects" redundant?

    2. Since whether quality assurance agencies are complying with the European standards (ESG) are judged by two different bodies, a divergence in criterion setting is inevitable.
    ----Is this sentence grammatical?

    3. how to make more unified judgments with the compliance has become one of the challenges.

    4. How to increase cooperation between different practitioners, and to make the quality assurance processes more comparable, in order to better meet the common European standards?

    -----In this sentence, I mean in order to meet European standards, we should increase cooperation...and make quality assurance processes more comparable.

    5. With the establishment of the standards for compliance with ESG, higher quality of education is correspondingly expected.
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    I'm really eager to construct grammatical & native-like & concise writings!!Please advice!! Thank you all!!

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    Re: Help~Are these sentences grammatical & concise?

    1. Quality assurance of higher education in Europe is currently being challenged in the following ways:
    Challenged in aspects is not quite right. ) Several aspects of quality-assurance in higher education in Europe are currently being challenged on the following issues:

    2. Since quality assurance agencies who comply with the European standards (ESG) are judged by two different bodies, a divergence in results (and criterion) is inevitable.

    3. How to make more unified judgments with the compliance of ?, has become one of the questions. (challenges.

    4. How to increase cooperation between different practitioners, and make the quality assurance processes more comparable, in order to better meet the common European standards? Seems fine.

    5. With the establishment of standards that comply with ESG, higher quality of education is correspondingly expected.
    Not bad. You don't see correspondingly often. )

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    Re: Help~Are these sentences grammatical & concise?

    Thanks a lot!

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