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    Please correct this

    I want to re-hire one emplyee who went back to his home country due to the death of his daughter- please find below.

    Please find enclosed CV of Mr... Mariano who worked with us from 2007 till 2010 and went back on emergency leave due to the death of his daughter by a tragic road accident in Philipines. Mr.... has now recovered from mourning and wish to join us again as a Driver and we have no objection to allow him to work with us as he has proven he is a valuable employee.

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    Re: Please correct this

    Quote Originally Posted by francycham View Post
    I want to re-hire one emplyee who went back to his home country due to the death of his daughter- please find below.

    Please find enclosed the CV of Mr... Mariano who worked with us from 2007 till 2010 and went back on emergency leave due to the death of his daughter in a tragic road accident in the Philippines. Mr.... has now recovered from mourning and wishes to join us again as a Driver. We have no objection to allowing him to work with us as he has proven he is a valuable employee.
    Bhai.

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    Re: Please correct this

    A little picky, perhaps, but I'd put a comma after "...allowing him to work with us".

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    Re: Please correct this

    Quote Originally Posted by fivejedjon View Post
    A little picky, perhaps, but I'd put a comma after "...allowing him to work with us".
    Yes, I agree.

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