I need help to improve my motivation letter for a masters program. I will be grateful if somebody can helps me with my motivation letter.............even fi you think I should change the content you can suggest me............

Dear Madam/Sir,

I am writing to apply for entrance in “Master of Science in International Finance” program in your renowned University. I appreciate this opportunity to provide further background information in support of my application.

I am a Business Administration graduate with major in Finance & Accounting and minor in Economics. I took my first finance course (Fundamentals of Financial Management) in my third semester of undergraduate studies and found that this subject attracts me most. Later, I decided to pursue my major in Finance and completed advanced finance courses like- Derivative Securities, Econometrics, International Finance, Working Capital Management, Corporate Finance, Investment Theory, etc. Also, different economics courses completed as part of minor requirement help me to take a holistic approach. The combination of my keen interest and strong background in study of finance lead me to set my career goal to become a specialist finance manager (may be a CFO). To accomplish myself as competent finance manager, in-depth knowledge of financial management in an international perspective is of utmost importance. I am confident that I have chosen the right program to fulfill my goal.

Besides, I acquired strong time management and organizational skills through my very first work experience as a Gentleman Cadet in Army. Later, through my work experience as a Customer Manager in GPTel I gained a lot of computer skills and had very interesting experience of using my communication skills. Lately, I worked as Undergraduate Assistant at a University, where I got the opportunity to use my academic and analytical skills in a prideful manner. In spite of part-time employment through most of my undergraduate studies, I earned 3.67 grade point average (4.0 basis). This is the evidence that I took my studies very seriously and also worked very hard. With my strong academic background, work habits and persistence I am sure that I will do very good if am accepted in International Finance program.

In conclusion, I believe, the Master of Science in International Finance program of your university is best suited for me because of its specialization in business studies, international orientation and study cost. Convenient study environment in B.City and international influence of Y.Country economy will also be very beneficial for my study.

Thank you for considering my application and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely yours,