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    please check the grammar

    We are sure you have loved all offers that Popley have been presenting to you.
    We know that you are a proud member of PURE family, hence we always make it our priority to pamper you with special Privileges.

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    Re: please check the grammar

    We are sure you have loved all the offers that Popley have been presenting to you. (correct if Popley is a company - if Popley is a person it should be "... that Popley has been ...")


    We know that you are a proud member of the PURE family, hence we always make it our priority to pamper you with special privileges. (Don't capitalize privileges. If the company is called Pure, say Pure, not PURE - PURE implies an acronym)

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