I don't know what EMI is, so it's hard to correct this.
So you thought that increasing home loan interests, surging inflation and skyrocketing real estate prices have made it impossible for you to own your dream home. Think again. In todayís world,
whenyou get everything on EMIs: cars, jewellery and even mobile phones. Why not a home? Now for the first time in India, indeed in the world, you can buy a home on EMI. Yes, you read it correctly: A HOME ON EMIs. Still donít believe it? Just pinch yourself. Because itís atime not just to dream but to make it a reality; RH group have made OWNING YOUR HOME THAT EASY NOW for you. ."
I'm sure you know the style is VERY informal. I don't know if your tone is right for this message.
Student or Learner