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    small para II please check

    Itís the most innovative concept ever developed in the world. We have kept the interest of our customers in the mind. Because whatever height of success RH group have achieved, itís just because of our customers trust in us. We are committed to make buying a home as affordable as possible for everyone and we have proved that we deliver what we promise.

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    Re: small para II please check

    Quote Originally Posted by new2grammar View Post
    Itís the most innovative concept ever developed (OR "ever to have been developed") in the world. We have kept the interest of our customers in the mind. Because whatever height (OR "degree" ) of success RH group have[/STRIKE][/STRIKE]has achieved, itís just (OR "only") because of our customers trust in us. We are committed to make home buying a home as affordable as possible for everyone and we have proved proven that we deliver what we promise.
    Some suggestions.

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    Re: small para II please check

    In BrE, these are acceptable:

    whatever degree of success RH group have achieved
    and we have proved that we deliver what we promise.


    ps. bilmcd's corrections are fine for AmE.

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