Student or Learner
Does this sentence make sense, please?
"According to the importance of your customers, you will agree to give them a discount".
Thank you very much.
"Agree to give" is a problem. Does it mean you agree with the boss to do this, or you agree with the customer if they ask?
"Give a discount to your customers according to their importance to your business."
(I think this version gives the impression that a very important customer gets a big discount, a less important customer gets a lesser discount, etc; not just a yes/no decision.) It's still very inadequate as a clear directive though.