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Youin order to apply for the international educational program ďErasmus MundusĒ.
I am a second year post-graduate student of the Faculty ... at .... (Russia), which I graduated from in 2009 with
thea Degree in Soil Science/Agrochemistry. I expect that the student mobility program at the University of .... (Germany) will contribute enormously to my academic research esand career plans.
There are several goals
,which Iíd like to achieve through participating in the Program. My primary intent is to have the opportunity to obtain experience ofin international communication and cooperation. I found very interesting the possibility to study and do research esin contact with an international academic society, an experience that would be very essential (AND/OR beneficial ?) for me. The chance sto adapt and develop a broader outlook on the world would help me to prepare for a career path that I am going to follow in the near estfuture.
The second strongest benefit of the Program, in my opinion, is that it is the optimal way to broaden my perspective,expand my horizons and
tocontribute to my personal development by expanding my horizons. The lionís ( OR greater ?) share of my educational experience is related to the study of soil science, agricultural chemistry, soil fertility and various aspects of global and international concerns in agriculture. My Masterís Thesis research was based on my previous study of soil-plant system pollution. andIt focused on the effect of preparation composed of trace elements and humates on heavy metals state in soil and on their distribution into plants. And suchCourses in the University such as ...... will be a good supplement not only to disciplines Iíve already studied at the faculty, but also for my scientific study.
I believe that Organic Agriculture is important and a forward-looking trend of the modern world, because of
theglobalization and increasing environmental pollution. Thatís why such courses as ...... will be useful asfor my self-development and for my future career.
I would also appreciate to have a possibility to use the resources of .... Library and Archives, the research facilities and, of course, to get professional consultation
son economics, food technology and agriculture with theuniversity experts.
The last, but not the least, benefit of the Erasmus Mundus Program is that it will give me a unique opportunity to improve my knowledge of English and to learn
some moreother languages at the same time. There is no better and more effective way to learn a language than to be immersed in a culture that speaks the language you are learning.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the skills and experience I obtain from taking part in the mobility program in the University will improve my knowledge in many branches of science; it will also provide an excellent social experience of communication and living abroad. Iím sure
,this knowledge will substantially enlarge my educational background and can be used to make an excellent career or to carry out asuccessful academic research and contributing to the development of Russian economy and agriculture.
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