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    #1

    can you look this paragraph please?

    Hi every body.

    Could you please correct this paragraph.

    The only thing that makes me happy is thinking about my mather, I'm a university student I left my family home 10 years ago, I live in the city while my family in the counterside. Living far from your friends and your family is very diffuclt for me,because every thing in the city strange unlike the counteryside where there is no social problems , polution and crimes.Additionally,the essential problems that I face in my life is lack of family advice and lovr.From all oll of this I can say that life without family is nothing.

    This is my life story.

    thanks every body.
    Last edited by amgoun; 28-May-2011 at 22:01.

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    #2

    Re: can you look this paragraph please?

    Quote Originally Posted by amgoun View Post
    hi every body.

    could you please correct this paragraph.

    the only thing that makes me happy is thinking about my mather, I'm a university student I left my family home 10 years ago, i live in the city while my family in the counterside. living far from your friends and your family is very diffuclt for me,because every thing in the city strange unlike the counteryside where there is no social problems , polution and crimes.additionally,the essential problems that I face in my life is lack of family advice and lovr.From all oll of this I can say thatlife without family is nothing.

    this is my life story.

    thanks every body.
    Before anyone looks at it or makes any corrections, please repost with the correct capital letters in the relevant places.

    Thank you.

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