Please rephrase it..

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new2grammar

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It is now possible to own a home in Mumbai without the burden of loan, without a long-term commitment and cream of the cake is - without any interest!
 

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Here is one suggestion:

It is now possible to own a home in Mumbai without the burden of a loan, without a long-term commitment, and - here's the icing on [STRIKE]cream of[/STRIKE] the cake [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] - without any interest!
 

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Or "and -- to top it all off -- without..."
 

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Mind you, it's a dubious sentence in terms of content. ;-)
 
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