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    Smile Is this correct?...

    I'm not sure if it's OK to say so:

    I love trees in spring, because they grow lovely flowers in this time.

    Thank you!

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    Re: Is this correct?...

    NOT A TEACHER.

    If you add verb+ing after "love," use "at this time of year" instead of "in this time," and use "in the Spring" instead of "spring" by itself, it would make your sentence looks a little bit btter.

    For instance, I love watching trees in the Spring because they grow lovely flowers at this time of year.

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    Lightbulb Re: Is this correct?...

    Quote Originally Posted by kiwi man View Post
    NOT A TEACHER.

    If you add verb+ing after "love," use "at this time of year" instead of "in this time," and use "in the Spring" instead of "spring" by itself, it would make your sentence looks a little bit btter.

    For instance, I love watching trees in the Spring because they grow lovely flowers at this time of year.
    Thank you for your opinion and correction!

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