A few suggestions.Could you help me proofread the following sentences?
1) With reference to the conversation with your Mr. B, the supervisor of the Supplies Department, this morning, I understood that despite urging the Supplies Department to
foster the commence ofbegin the construction work at ABC stadium under several circumstances(?), it appears that the Supplies Department isstill yet todoes not have a concrete blueprint offor the construction work.
2) Water supply has always been the major managerial problem at TWD playground for years. The absence of a water tape (not familiar with this term)
badlyseriously affects our daily management, ranging from plants' watering to facilitates (facilities?) cleansing and arouses thepublic criticism. As such, I suggest toasking the Building Department forto study ingthe installation of a water tape at the playground in the near future.
3) Our understanding is that the construction work
hasstarted sincein May 2011, but there is still no signindication of having itsit being completed atby the end of this month, which was officially stated by your contractor prior to the commencement of the construction work. I wonder ifIs there isany wrongproblem with the construction work?
Many thanks in advance!
Student or Learner