A few suggestions.Could you help me proofread the following sentences?
1) With reference to the conversation with your Mr. B, the supervisor of the Supplies Department, this morning, I understood that despite urging the Supplies Department tofoster the commence ofbegin the construction work at ABC stadiumunder several circumstances(?), it appears that the Supplies Departmentisstillyet todoes not have a concrete blueprintoffor the construction work.
2) Water supply has always been the major managerial problem at TWD playground for years. The absence of a water tape (not familiar with this term)badlyseriously affects our daily management, ranging from plants' watering to facilitates (facilities?) cleansing and arousesthepublic criticism. As such, I suggesttoasking the Building Departmentforto studyingthe installation of a water tape at the playground in the near future.
3) Our understanding is that the construction workhasstartedsincein May 2011, but there is still nosignindication ofhaving itsit being completedatby the end of this month, which was officially stated by your contractor prior to the commencement of the construction work.I wonder ifIs thereisanywrongproblem with the construction work?
Many thanks in advance!

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