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    #1

    twin tower

    Please check out the following sentences.

    1. Kuala Lumper is a modern city.
    2. It has a charming airport, whose design is very marvelous.
    3. The receptionists in the airport are friendly.
    4. Besides, there is an impressive architecture called "Twin Tower".
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    Re: twin tower

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    1. Kuala Lumper is a modern city.
    OK.
    2. It has a charming airport, whose design is very marvelous.
    Could you explain what you mean by "charming" here? It's a bit unusual to call an airport charming, but it's OK if you know what your doing. You don't need the word "very" before "marvelous",
    3. The receptionists in the airport are friendly.
    I'd use "at the airport", but please wait for another opinion. I'm not sure "in" is wrong.
    4. Besides, there is an impressive architecture called "Twin Tower".
    Besides, there is an impressive piece of architecture called the Twin Towers.

    Are these sentences supposed to make a whole? You enumerated them, so it's not clear that they form a contiguous piece of text. Do they?
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    #3

    Re: twin tower

    Note: Kuala Lumpur.

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    Re: twin tower

    I'm not sure about the use of "receptionists" at all for people who work at an airport. Who do you mean? The check-in staff? The people on the information desk? The air hostesses? Baggage handlers? There are so many people who work at an airport! If you don't want to specify one particular job, then I would just say "The airport staff are very friendly."

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    Re: twin tower

    Is it really called the Twin Tower, not the Twin Towers?

    (Be aware that "the Twin Towers" has a different meaning to Americans. That was the term used for the World Trade Center building.)
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: twin tower

    Quote Originally Posted by Barb_D View Post
    Is it really called the Twin Tower, not the Twin Towers?
    I believe it's called the Twin Towers. Petronas Towers - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

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