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"Three days ago, Linda choked on a fishbone and she nearly had to be hospitalized. But miraculously, she took it out by herself in the end."
Does this sentence have a natural conversational tone?
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It's OK. The only thing I don't understand is when she took the fishbone out. When was "in the end"? After the paramedics decided she didn't need to be hospitalised? Two days after she nearly choked?
I think I would use something like "Miraculously, she was able to remove the fishbone herself before any permanent damage was done".
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