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    #1

    Is my sentence correct?

    playing team games leads to teamwork.

    No matter how many times you wash them, they still look the same when you first wore them.

    By participating children in cleaning a house, the will get used to being clean and tidy.
     

    Thank you for your response.
    Last edited by arzgol; 29-Jun-2011 at 19:50.

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    #2

    Re: Is my sentence correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by arzgol View Post
    playing team games leads to teamwork.

    No matter how many times you wash them, they still look the same as when you first wore them.

    By children participating in cleaning a house, they will get used to being clean and tidy.
     

    Thank you for your response.
    "By having children participate..." sounds better to me.

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