Are these sentences correct:
1-John in front of the window moving rapidly throw me a ball.
2-His hand on the racket squeezing hard had turned red.
3-The man at the table dealing the cards told me to come here.
I think it would be better to say:
John moving rapidly in front of the window...
His hand squeezing the racket hard...
The man dealing the cards at the table...
But are "1", "2" and "3" incorrect?
Last edited by navi tasan; 09-Jul-2011 at 06:29.
Thank you Bhahisahab
Maybe "1" would be better with two commas:
1-John, in front of the window, moving rapidly, threw me a ball