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Please would anyone be able to check whether the sentence below is grammatically and structurally correct? Will really appreciate your help and time.
''Dear Mr XX,
I am writing to show my interest in entering agreement with yourself in hoping to appoint myself as an exclusive distributor in Christchurch. It would offer a great opportunity for your company to move inventory faster. If you are interested in taking this on, please contact me at _______ to explore this further. Thank you.''
Many thanks everyone.
Many thanks billmcd for your time!! Much appreciated!