[Grammar] Advertisement tagline

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pkbc4

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:roll:Hi, my advertising designer has created this tagline... it sounds correct when i read it the first time. However, the more i read the sentence, it sounded incorrect..LOL. Can anyone please check for me is this tagline correct without 'be' ? "Let your child's creativity inspired."

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No, it needs the 'be': Let your child's creativity be inspired
 

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Depending on what you do, "be inspired" might not be right, in any case. Perhaps "flourish" is what you're really looking for.
 
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