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Oakland, California - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Shouldn't there be, ignoring the percentages in parentheses, "who were/that were" between the whole numbers and the racial adjectives?
The racial makeup of Oakland was 134,925 (34.5%) White, 109,471 (28.0%) African American, 3,040 (0.8%) Native American, 65,811 (16.8%) Asian, 2,222 (0.6%) Pacific Islander, 53,378 (13.7%) from other races, and 21,877 (5.6%) from two or more races.
Shouldn't there be, ignoring the percentages in parentheses, "who were/that were" between the whole numbers and the racial adjectives?