Student or Learner
How many goods have been finished and passed your inspection? Please send us your QC inspection report today for our final inspection tomorrow
Fine, but maybe too many 'inspection's. You could drop the 2nd one (unless there are other sorts of QC report), and maybe change the 3rd - 'Please send us your QC report today, ready for our final check tomorrow'...? But it's perfectly clear as it is.