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    After six months

    Please, check if the following passage is grammatically correct. Thanks!

    **This is a translated passage. It is neither intended to express a political opinion nor start a political discussion. I'm just interested in the language. **

    Although the revolution which has toppled the president's regime has already marked six months since it broke out, the capital is as far as ever from calmness. After half a year of a nonstop revolution the light at the end of the tunnel hasn't been seen yet and therefore, the country hasn't yet managed to regain its stability and calmness or get out of the state of chaos into which it was forced at the end of January 2011. In recent weeks the strain in the capital has been mounting and the demonstrators have been coming back in masses to the square. The contained rage is about to explode not only in the capital but also throughout the country as, for example, along the banks of the canal which angry demonstrators were trying to block over and over again during the last week.

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    Re: After six months

    Quote Originally Posted by motico View Post
    Please, check if the following passage is grammatically correct. Thanks!


    **This is a translated passage. It is neither intended to express a political opinion nor start a political discussion. I'm just interested in the language. **


    Although the revolution which has toppled the president's regime has already marked six months since it broke out, the capital is as far as ever from calmness. After half a year of a nonstop revolution, the light at the end of the tunnel hasn't been seen yet. and therefore, The country hasn't yet managed to regain its stability and calmness or get out of the state of chaos into which it was forced at the end of January 2011. In recent weeks the strain in the capital has been mounting and the demonstrators have been coming back in masses to the square. The contained rage is about to explode not only in the capital but also throughout the country as, for example, along the banks of the canal, which angry demonstrators were trying to block over and over again during the last week.
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