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Does my sentence sound correct?
By working on a soild material, the shape of a sculpture emerges/ forms.
Thank you for your response.
Last edited by arzgol; 06-Aug-2011 at 23:16.
No, 'working' is a dangling participle. 'The shape' is not working; the sculptor is.
Originally Posted by arzgol
"By working on a solid material, the sculptor makes the shape of the sculpture emerge."