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    emerges

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    By working on a soild material, the shape of a sculpture emerges/ forms.

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    Last edited by arzgol; 06-Aug-2011 at 23:16.

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    Re: emerges

    Quote Originally Posted by arzgol View Post
    Does my sentence sound correct?

    By working on a soild material, the shape of a sculpture emerges/ forms.

    Thank you for your response.
    No, 'working' is a dangling participle. 'The shape' is not working; the sculptor is.
    "By working on a solid material, the sculptor makes the shape of the sculpture emerge."

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