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  1. Bushwhacker's Avatar
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    #1

    Cool to take some away by buying them

    Given the following sentence:

    In the last years, Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers, quite enough to attract Hollywood’s interest in our young talents and even to take some away by buying them

    Do you find the last part is correct: "even to take some away by buying them", meaning "attracting young promises with job and money?

    Any other objection as for the paragraph?

    Thank You

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    #2

    Re: to take some away by buying them

    Quote Originally Posted by Bushwhacker View Post
    Given the following sentence:

    In the last years, Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers, quite enough to attract Hollywood’s interest in our young talents and even to take some away by buying them

    Do you find the last part is correct: "even to take some away by buying them", meaning "attracting young promises with job and money?

    Any other objection as for the paragraph?

    Thank You
    "Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers," It's not clear what you want to say here.

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    Cool Re: to take some away by buying them

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    "Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers," It's not clear what you want to say here.
    I mean that Spanish fantastic cinema is being so good that its professionals (directors, screenwriters, technicians...) are being hired by Hollywood

    Thank You

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    Re: to take some away by buying them

    Quote Originally Posted by Bushwhacker View Post
    I mean that Spanish fantastic cinema is being so good that its professionals (directors, screenwriters, technicians...) are being hired by Hollywood

    Thank You
    Try starting it "In recent years...."

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    #5

    Cool Re: to take some away by buying them

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    Try starting it "In recent years...."
    Thank You, but what about the remaining?

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    Re: to take some away by buying them

    Quote Originally Posted by Bushwhacker View Post
    Thank You, but what about the remaining?
    "In recent years "Spanish fantastic cinema" has been so good that...."
    Now you.

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    #7

    Cool Re: to take some away by buying them

    Quote Originally Posted by bhaisahab View Post
    "In recent years "Spanish fantastic cinema" has been so good that...."
    Now you.

    How about this new proposal:

    Lately, Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers, quite enough to attract Hollywood’s interest in our young talents as far as hiring them

    Is it correct? Understandable?

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