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    Please Punctuate Paragraph

    [B]Asian Labour In Textile Sector
    In some of Asian countries Textile labour is illiterate and many time they do lot of mistakes.
    Some time they loss their life during working under machines. We should create awareness among labours and try to arrange Labour awareness trainings because they are the are the back bone of textile industry and we are the responsible of their lives.

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    Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by engr.yasir ali bhatti View Post
    [B]Asian Labour In Textile Sector
    Quote Originally Posted by engr.yasir ali bhatti View Post
    In some of Asian countries Textile labour is illiterate and many time they do lot of mistakes.
    Some time they loss their life during working under machines. We should create awareness among labours and try to arrange Labour awareness trainings because they are the are the back bone of textile industry and we are the responsible of their lives.
    Please try to punctuate it yourself first (if you haven't already done so in this post) and we will comment. Thank you.

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    Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    [B]Asian Labour In Textile Sector
    In some of Asian countries,Textile labour is illiterate and many time they do lot of mistakes.
    Some time they loss their life during working under machines. We should create awareness among labours and try to arrange Labour awareness trainings because they are the are the back bone of textile industry and we are the responsible of their lives.


    Please check it now

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    Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    The punctuation is fine but there are a lot of problems with the text.

    Rover

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    Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by Rover_KE View Post
    The punctuation is fine but there are a lot of problems with the text.

    Rover
    With the use of capital letters as well.

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    Smile Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    Text problem. Sorry would you like to tell how?

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    Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by engr.yasir ali bhatti View Post
    Text problem. Sorry would you like to tell how?
    For example, your first sentence. You wrote:

    "In some of Asian countries,Textile labour is illiterate and many time they do lot of mistakes."

    I have underlined the main errors. It should read something along the lines of:

    "In some Asian countries, the people who work in the textile industry are illiterate and they often make mistakes."

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    Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    *Not a teacher.

    Yasir, I have tried to rectify some of your mistakes in the following paragraph. Now lets see what the teacher have to say.

    Asian Labour In Textile Sector

    In some of the Asian countries, textile labourers are illiterate, and hence prone to make blunders/serious mistakes-some of which prove fatal- while working on heavy machinery. We must realize that these labourers are the backbone of textile industry in those countries. So, we should try and create/raise awareness among labourers and arrange training programs for them, so that they may work efficiently and without risking lives.

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    Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    Sir emsr2d2, please check my above paragraph as well.

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    Smile Re: Please Punctuate Paragraph

    Great!!!!
    thanks All of You..

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