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Hello everyone,
I want to ask ,,is this essay has any mistake?? maybe in grammar!!
An Inconvenient Truth is a documentary film about global warming that has been written by Former United States Vice President Al Gore. This is the area which Al Gore has been interested in for many years especially after he took a course with Roger Revelle the climate expert at Harvard University. That made him travelled around United State and the world to educate and aware people about the effects of the global worming and the climate change.
The documentary is based on "power point" presentation to show graphs, charts, predictions , scientific models, data and a lot of photographs which appear on a big screen behind Al Gore as he give his talk to support what he is saying in front of many audience. In fact, the idea of document his awareness campaign came from producer called David, after he saw Gore's presentation at a global warming town-hall meeting in New York City in 2004, then they worked together to adapt the presentation into a documentary film.
Throughout the film, Gore focuses on different activates that might humans do which contribute and affect on the chemical composition of the earth's atmosphere and consequently cause negative changes in our climate. One example of that is the possibility of raising sea levels by around 30 feet due to the collapse of ice sheets in Antarctica and Greenland which leads to raise refuges rate to reach 100 million.
In the last section of Gore's presentation, he said to his audience " if appropriate actions are taken soon, the effects of global warming can be successfully reversed by releasing less carbon dioxide and planting more vegetation to consume existing carbon dioxide" which make people optimistic that they can deal with these peoblems.
Thanks a lot
I want to ask ,,is this essay has any mistake?? maybe in grammar!!
An Inconvenient Truth is a documentary film about global warming that has been written by Former United States Vice President Al Gore. This is the area which Al Gore has been interested in for many years especially after he took a course with Roger Revelle the climate expert at Harvard University. That made him travelled around United State and the world to educate and aware people about the effects of the global worming and the climate change.
The documentary is based on "power point" presentation to show graphs, charts, predictions , scientific models, data and a lot of photographs which appear on a big screen behind Al Gore as he give his talk to support what he is saying in front of many audience. In fact, the idea of document his awareness campaign came from producer called David, after he saw Gore's presentation at a global warming town-hall meeting in New York City in 2004, then they worked together to adapt the presentation into a documentary film.
Throughout the film, Gore focuses on different activates that might humans do which contribute and affect on the chemical composition of the earth's atmosphere and consequently cause negative changes in our climate. One example of that is the possibility of raising sea levels by around 30 feet due to the collapse of ice sheets in Antarctica and Greenland which leads to raise refuges rate to reach 100 million.
In the last section of Gore's presentation, he said to his audience " if appropriate actions are taken soon, the effects of global warming can be successfully reversed by releasing less carbon dioxide and planting more vegetation to consume existing carbon dioxide" which make people optimistic that they can deal with these peoblems.
Thanks a lot