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    correct way to write it

    Hello,
    I am having a hard time trying to figure out what would be the correct way to write the paragraph below, I would appreciate your help. thanks.


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    Re: correct way to write it

    Quote Originally Posted by globsticks View Post
    Hello,
    I am having a hard time trying to figure out what would be the correct way to write the paragraph below, I would appreciate your help. thanks.


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