rainous
Member
- Joined
- Jun 8, 2011
- Member Type
- Other
- Native Language
- Galician
- Home Country
- Armenia
- Current Location
- Antilles
"I often find myself drenched in thoughts thinking I might as well just give it all up and jump into the river."
Can anyone please help me find and correct any grammatical problems in this sentence, if there is any?
I am especially not happy with the underlined part which seems somewhat redundant.
But I don't know how I should fix it.
Suggestions please~
Thanks
It's not me by the way.
Can anyone please help me find and correct any grammatical problems in this sentence, if there is any?
I am especially not happy with the underlined part which seems somewhat redundant.
But I don't know how I should fix it.
Suggestions please~
Thanks
It's not me by the way.