Crane Accident

[shameera]

Dear Sir,

This is to kindly inform you that our Crane using in Operation & Maintanance project has been involved with an accident, Crane has fall down while they are loading to a towing truck at a work site. The repair will be carried out with SAICO workshop in Riyadh. Please find herewith attached accident photos.


Thanks & regards

 

[SirGod]

* Not a teacher

Some things are completely interpretable. Correct me if you wanted to say something else.

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you to inform you that Crane from the Operation & Maintenance project has been involved in an accident. Crane fell down while he and his co-workers were loading a towing truck at the work site. The repairs will be carried out by SAICO Workshop, in Riyadh. I have attached the accident photos.

Regards,
Your name

 

[billmcd]

Dear Sir,

This is to [STRIKE]kindly[/STRIKE] inform you that [STRIKE]our[/STRIKE] the crane [STRIKE]using[/STRIKE] used in the Operation & Maintanance project (if this is a usual or routine service, are caps really necessary?) has been involved [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] in an accident, The crane has [STRIKE]fall down [/STRIKE] fallen (OR collapsed) while [STRIKE]they [/STRIKE][STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] workers were loading to a tow[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE] truck at a work site. The repair will be carried out (OR completed)[STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] at SAICO workshop in Riyadh. Please find herewith attached accident photos.


Thanks & regards

b.

 

[SirGod]

I thought Crane was somebody's name. Don't capitalize it if it is not. It confuses people.